The Night We Began Dating

[stephanie23]

This poem is also copyrighted so as I said about Could I be falling in love? I would be honoured if anyone chooses to use it. More details in other thread.

The night we began dating, my life began anew,
Above turned from a dark gray to a marvelous blue
The moon shone brighter than ever before
For I knew we'd be together for evermore
The night we began dating I was feeling low,
In my heart there was no glow
Love entered my heart from out of space
Your smile what bliss
And then that kiss
As I look at your face
After that first embrace
My love for you
Could not be more true

[obsessedfae]

Its very beautiful but as I am single..I have no reason to make a layout out of it :(

[stephanie23]

That's okay of course.. The irony of this poem is the person I wrote it for was my first love. The first guy I have ever dated at that. And I have made lots since but not of love. The rest is on the darker side of things. Newest being Betrayal. And then I have made funny ones like I Hate Noise which I used for a paper scrapbook page not to long ago of me sitting there curled up in a ball with a headache looking pretty crabby. I have used these 2 love poems though for my brothers wedding photos so they did end up useful for me in the end. If you are ever looking for poems of other subjects let me know and I might be able to come up with something BUT I can't seem to come up with anymore about love (writers block). LOL.

[obsessedfae]

Oh thats cool. I have complete writer's block and sometimes I have trouble journaling so I use poems in the place of my own words. I have a 15 month old son named Charlie. So if you want to, a poem about him may be nice for a LO..But thats up to you. Either way I thought it was cute that you used a love poem you wrote for your brother's wedding. How creative! :)

[stephanie23]

Tell me a little about Charlie.... And I can see what I can come up with I will need two days tops after I get a little info since I have a two year old myself it takes me alittle longer to think but I love writing about goobers.

[koepps]

I'd love to read the one about "I hate noise". It so describes my son & I... Love the quieter moments in life.