CC needed please

[~sarah~]

Would anyone mind checking out my gallery and giving cc on these 2 layouts please i am mostly happy with them but their is something not right only i am not sure what it is :rolleyes:

Thanks in advance for any help you may be able to give,

http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70795&cat=500&ppuser=22839
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70709&cat=500&ppuser=22839

[~sarah~]

i made some changes to both of the above lo's would anyone mind adding anything else i could do with it.

thanks.

Version 1 http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70795&cat=1049

Version2
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70953&cat=1049

Version 1
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70709&cat=500&ppuser=22839

Version 2
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=70963&cat=500&ppuser=22839

[Pam]

I posted to your gallery -- your layouts are looking great, but to give some depth, a drop shadow could be added (it helps to make your photo and elements "pop off the page" as if it were dimensional.) The other thing I mention comes from doing newsletters and desktop publishing -- "cutsey" fonts are difficult to read when used in sentences or longer phrases, save them for titles or special words. Experiment some with simpler fonts or even hand printed type fonts like kidsprint.

[~sarah~]

Thank you for you input Pam i will go and check out your comments now :)

[~sarah~]

Thank you for your CC Pam i do a problem with drop shadows i never seem to get them right they either dont show enough or they are to much and make the photo look like it is off the page.
Is their any advice you could give me on that please???