I'm stuck!! Please help

[evergreen100]

I have just uploaded a layout which needs some expertise from you lovely talented people. I have listed my concerns in the layout description. Hope someone can help.
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=71601&cat=536

[~sarah~]

I just checked out you LO an it is very nice their were a couple of comments already on what you can do to improve on it so i didnt need to add anything i just wanted to say it is a very nice layout good job!

[Amber]

I posted some comments on your LO! :)

[LindaBelle]

Very nice start....I left some comments also.