Storyboard CC

[ekrieg]

I am just getting into photography, and took photos of my friend, Bethany, for her engagement. I wanted to make a 10x20 storyboard and have it framed for her shower gift. I have designed two storyboards. I would appreciate any CC on them that you can offer. I'm not completely satisfied with either one, do you have any suggestions? What do you like from each one, what do you not like from each one, can I take parts of both and combine for the perfect look?

Option 1:
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=134566&cat=500&ppuser=24967

Option 2:
http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=134565&cat=500&ppuser=24967

Thanks for your input!
Erin :)