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aj_trouble
10-07-2009, 04:23 PM
I have a really nice poem that I want to use on a LO with my sons photo, but it's a poem by WH Audrey and one that is about loss of a loved one ... can anyone come up with some suggestions for changing the last line for me please???

“He was (is) my North, my South, my East and West,
My working week and Sunday rest,
My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;
I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong.”

Any ideas????

Tina
10-07-2009, 05:06 PM
“He (is) my North, my South, my East and West,
My working week and Sunday rest,
My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;
A love to last the ages, a bond forever long.”

aj_trouble
10-07-2009, 05:11 PM
Oh Tina .. wow that was fast and tons better than I could ever do!!! Thank you.

I've been meaning to mention to you, some of your fab wordart turned up in a book I was reading the other day ... will try to dig it out and give you the reference!!!

Tina
10-07-2009, 05:56 PM
no problem! Glad you like it!

that would be great if you could find my w/a in the book :)