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Old 10-20-2011, 01:24 AM   #1
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Critique wanted please!

hi everyone I'm making a photo book for my grand nieces from photos, I need your advice...I made it into a storybook about themself...I'm wondering if anyone has any ideas or if I'm missing something or weather it makes sense, or if I could improve the story line...the children are about 2 years old..looking forward to any advise good or bad...i just want it perfect before i send it out for printing...thanks in advance here is a link...

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Old 10-21-2011, 04:55 AM   #2
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I think it is very nice. They will love it!
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Old 10-21-2011, 05:14 AM   #3
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What a lovely Idea I am sure when there older they will treasure the books
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Old 10-22-2011, 01:22 AM   #4
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hey guys, i have made some changes, channged the font n added a front cover n i hope i made it read better...thanks for CC...let me know if it's improved...do u think it's ready 4 printing?

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