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LindaBelle
July 06 Spotlight
Registered: August 2005
Location: Puget Sound, Washington
Posts: 2,830
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Thu August 17, 2006 4:27am
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WOW Mars!!! This is beautifully creative!! I love the torn curve of the paper drawing the eye right to the picture focus and the perfect ratio of the two papers! Lovely job with the dreamy filters! And the doodled butterflies are perfect in size, placement and especially lovely, soft, dreamy color!!!
I'm just not too sure about the doodle cutting across her face...I want to brush it aside ..but that may just be me....LOL. A thought I have is what if you increase the doodle so that her face is more in between two of the lines and the top line runs along the area of her hairline more?
I have NO idea if that would work or mess it up...just one of those have to try it kinda things.
This is a really beautiful layout!!! But then again..I've never seen one of yours that isn't!!!
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KittyDog
Addicted to this place
Registered: April 2006
Location: South of the Border
Posts: 1,094
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Thu August 17, 2006 4:40am
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I admit I waited on somebody else to post first. I too want to push the doodle out of her face. How about try it on the other side so it is on her hair. Other than that I really like it. I am not ready to put stuff on faces yet. I know that it is the new style, but first let me get use to doodles. Now if it were my MIL...I would say cover it up. LOL
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Debb Cozzi
DET Alumni
Registered: June 2004
Posts: 6,320
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Thu August 17, 2006 5:09am
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I love the look and design of this Mars. I think I would just 'scootch' up the doodle ever so slightly so that the curling part of the the doodles 'tail' curves behind her ear and then just barely comes up and brushes her cheek. (You might need to adjust the first line and maybe the second line of your poem if you do this.) I absolutely love your font choices btw. Lovely work!
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Tara
Team Digital and always OrangeSue!
Registered: June 2005
Location: A place that the Beach Boys sing about
Posts: 7,517
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Thu August 17, 2006 5:48am
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Love the colors and I love how you put the doodle right smack dab over your photo!!! That takes guts!!! I agree with the suggestions to move it slightly...but all in all, I think this layout is a bold move and it worked out quite well!!!!
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Rene Bross
DSP Senior Designer
Registered: February 2006
Location: Spokane, WA
Posts: 6,697
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Thu August 17, 2006 7:11am
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Gorgeous Mars!! What a perfect quote. The doodle makes me really stare at the photo, but it does make me want to move it a bit too. But I really LOVE this LO!!
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cybergram
October '06 Spotlight
Registered: January 2005
Location: Nova Scotia, Canada
Posts: 11,364
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Thu August 17, 2006 1:16pm
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Mars, this is fantastic, just love the feeling it projects & the doodle is WOW, great layout.
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tinksmom
I live at this place!
Registered: September 2005
Posts: 3,404
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Thu August 17, 2006 1:47pm
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Great job on this. I love your use of the kit. The Quote is perfect as is the new placement of the doodle.
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Ms M
FEB '08 Spotlight Member
Registered: January 2005
Location: Central Massachusetts
Posts: 18,472
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Thu August 17, 2006 2:04pm
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I don't know if you moved the doodle since the other comments, but I really like it where it is! The photo is so serious and the doodle sort of contrasts with that feeling... anyway... she also looks so young after you applied the filters to her... almost child-like... think you could apply the same filters to my face in real life? lol... LOVE your LO!!
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eyelet4u2
Addicted to this place
Registered: August 2006
Posts: 1,808
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Thu August 17, 2006 2:19pm
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Wow this is awesome I love it!
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boobearsmama1
Aug 2009 Spotlight Member & DET 4, DET 10
Registered: November 2005
Posts: 11,149
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Thu August 17, 2006 4:08pm
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great job mars! love the colors. love the photo. love the font. excellent
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LindaBelle
July 06 Spotlight
Registered: August 2005
Location: Puget Sound, Washington
Posts: 2,830
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Thu August 17, 2006 5:26pm
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FANTABULOUS!!!!
Reworking and moving the doodle slightly made all the difference!!!
Now it's over the top gorgeous....WOW!!!!
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Debb Cozzi
DET Alumni
Registered: June 2004
Posts: 6,320
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Thu August 17, 2006 6:58pm
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PERFECT!!!!!! 
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isshinryu_mom
Dec '06 Spotlight
Registered: November 2005
Location: Michigan
Posts: 4,939
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Thu August 17, 2006 9:15pm
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Lovely! Don't you love this kit??
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Beachcomber
I live at this place!
Registered: December 2005
Location: California
Posts: 3,617
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Thu August 17, 2006 9:30pm
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Beautiful. I like the butter and doodle.
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CrystalMarie
Been around this place
Registered: June 2005
Location: Central Texas
Posts: 74
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Thu August 17, 2006 10:08pm
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I want to see the page pre-doodle move! lol I'd also love to see the picture pre-filters. What filters did you use? I use psp and didnt know we had filters. Beautiful page!
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ArtcTiger
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Registered: October 2005
Location: Alabama
Posts: 1,570
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Fri August 18, 2006 1:13am
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Love the doodles over the photo...so pretty!
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JamieStillwagon
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Registered: December 2005
Location: Outside of Waco Texas
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Fri August 18, 2006 3:12pm
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Great doodle work....dont you just love being able to FIX bad photos to make them into something so beautiful. Fabulous layout!
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artmama
New to this place
Registered: August 2007
Location: Christchurch, New Zealand
Posts: 10
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Mon August 27, 2007 9:43pm
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Wow, really love this layout, the way you have used my fonts are exactly as I intended. My name is jules and I am designing digiscrapping stuff myself at artmama.co.nz and I don't have a creative team yet, (if you are interested please let me know as your work is lovely). Anyway, I was wondering if you would mind if I linked to this layout in my small links gallery please?
As a thankyou, I would be happy to send you a coupon for the grand opening of my shop artmama.co.nz/ezypal which I hope to have at the beginning of September.
Thanks so much for your consideration.
Regards
Julianne
(Art Mama, julesart fonts)
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