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mom2triplets04
I live at this place!
Registered: August 2006 Posts: 3,880
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macscrapz
This place rocks
Registered: August 2006 Location: Kentucky, USA Posts: 372
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Tue October 3, 2006 3:47am
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That font really made the difference! Great job!
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gabmacca
I live at this place!
Registered: May 2005 Location: A land downunder!! Posts: 3,192
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Tue October 3, 2006 3:59am
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Beautiful work - my only suggestion would be to put the word 'daddy' onto the last line with 'arms' - sort of a finale!
Gabbyxx
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Kristen
I live at this place!
Registered: April 2004 Location: Northern California Posts: 4,320
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Tue October 3, 2006 10:32am
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Ah - this is gorgeous! That main photo is spectacular. And all your details are supporting it. I like the color of the word art, and the font for the journaling, and I really like how the smaller photo is turning out.
Here's the biggest thing that's catching my attention. Any possibility of rotating the main photo so the horizon is straight? Or does that throw off the position of dad & daughter?
I'd either make the word art a little smaller, or move it down so it doesn't overlap the horizon. And I'd add the date.
But this is, as I said, gorgeous!
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Michelle Davies
Love this place
Registered: January 2006 Location: Indiana Posts: 197
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Tue October 3, 2006 12:59pm
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Have to agree...doing a great job. The photos are simply heartwarming. I love the movement of the corner with her hands....kind of makes it look like she's right at the edge of the water. Cool effect. I have to second the photo straightening-didn't notice til it was pointed out but that would definitely put it over the top! NIce Job!
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Terrydeb
My favorite place
Registered: May 2004 Posts: 977
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Tue October 3, 2006 3:21pm
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I agree with Kristen... I recently went to the beach and have to fix all my ocean horizens! I just use a "straighten picture" button where you choose a line that is to be straight. Works like a charm. Great LO.
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jstbkuz
Been around this place
Registered: March 2006 Posts: 84
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Tue October 3, 2006 4:32pm
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AWESOME LO!
THe main picture really catches my eye!
cheers
rez
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