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WhiteAngel
My favorite place
Registered: December 2004
Location: Sydney, Austrralia
Posts: 849
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I'm doing a weeding album for my nephew, so this is my 1st LO, I'm after a more masculine feel. I'm after lot's CC please...
Paper: Shaiya - Chaleur Hivernale, Ebell: Bel Vidotti Tatiana Kit & Sunny Day Kit, Alpha: Retrodiva-chocolat, Font: Starshine
If you want to see a flip version of this wedding album click on the link: http://issuu.com/whiteangel/docs/adrain_amanda_ |
· Date: Tue July 21, 2009 · Views: 573
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Keywords: masculine, wedding, boys
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Vallie
Vallie of the Shadows
Registered: December 2005
Location: Oz
Posts: 56,259
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He looks like David Beckham! Super effect!!!!!
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PQ
Digital Elite Team
Team Digital Gallery Mod
Registered: April 2006
Location: Doing my "no more snow" warrior dance
Posts: 113,198
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GrandmaCrys
Yay I can choose my name!
Registered: December 2005
Location: Just looking forward to our next domino game.
Posts: 103,817
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Awesome effect; creative page.
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sandygb
DET Alumni
Registered: February 2006
Location: West Chester, PA United States
Posts: 36,677
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Hi Whiteangel. I think this is the page ypu requested CC on. Here are a couple of observations....
Many of the items on your page appear to be "floating". If this was an actual paper page, your title would not have a shadow that large. I would remove the shadow, or perhaps try a very low shadow instead.
The same is true of the other elements on the page. For a more realistic layout, try reducing the size of the shadows and see how you like it.
While I love the effect you used on the photo, (I think it would work beautifully on another page) it doesn't strike me as fitting for a wedding layout. If you are trying for a more masculine page, perhaps you might choose a different kit.....something with neutral colors and less feminine elements.
I do like your overall page arrangement!
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Sandy
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jamelia
Love this place
Registered: July 2008
Location: manchester u.k
Posts: 234
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love this layout hun, the photo affect is amazing, love it to bits..........
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aj_trouble
DET Alumni
Registered: July 2006
Location: England- right in the middle!!
Posts: 2,127
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I agree with Sandygb, I think you need to reduce the shadowing distance on your elements so that it looks more like a 'real' LO (which is the style I think you are aiming for?).
Overall, I don't think the photo effect (while awesome) enhances the beautiful photo (truly stunning - wish mine were this good!) or compliment the papers/elements you have selected. I would either change the kit and use the effect or save the effect for another LO. Hope this helps. xxx
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Penny M
DET Alumni
Registered: November 2005
Location: Home in Arkansas
Posts: 13,671
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No additional cc from me. I think Sandy and aj said it all. I do like the design of the page.
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