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GailS
DET 5 & 6 Alumni, Photographer and Scrap Addict
Registered: March 2006
Location: Twin Cities MN
Posts: 25,238
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Sat August 11, 2012 4:12pm
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This is so pretty!!! I love its softness!
Boot Camp critique:
Photo quality - clear, bright, used well
Promoting the Kit - good
Journaling - spelling, etc. - if used - wonderful
Typography/Titling - good
The only other suggestion I can make for this one, would be not to compress it so much? The journaling is a bit fuzzy and I had to zoom in to be able to read it. Your layout will be much sharper if you can keep it to about 100-125kb in size (the dimensions you used are fine).
Also, for a DET contest, it's preferable that you add the journaling to your comments, on the chance that anything you try doesn't keep the journaling from being difficult to read. 
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PQ
Digital Elite Team
Team Digital Gallery Mod
Registered: April 2006
Location: Doing my "no more snow" warrior dance
Posts: 112,166
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Mon August 13, 2012 1:58am
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Your grandmother was a very beautiful young girl! Lovely page!
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vwortman
Gloriously Grand Queen of the Crop
Registered: May 2006
Location: Prineville, OR
Posts: 38,810
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Wed August 15, 2012 4:19pm
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what a lovely page!
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smikeel
Yay I can choose my name!
Registered: May 2012
Location: 200 miles away~in any direction~from a large city.
Posts: 7,394
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Thu August 16, 2012 3:17am
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Elegant page - Beautiful photo!! Well Done!!
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I am sMIKeel, but you can call me Kim
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mshawnee1
Addicted to this place
Registered: December 2005
Location: Lansing, Michigan
Posts: 1,111
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Fri August 17, 2012 12:24am
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This is so elegant and pure. Beautiful page!
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LKB
October '10 Spotlight Member
Registered: February 2008
Location: Iowa
Posts: 4,105
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Mon August 20, 2012 2:13pm
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Beautiful layout, love the background you made with the papers.
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Linda
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Jenni
DET Alumni
Registered: November 2005
Location: Wichita, KS
Posts: 9,807
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Mon August 20, 2012 3:21pm
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Love the overall tone of this with the same colors through the layout. Very elegant!
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happybeingamom
Yay I can choose my name!
Registered: May 2006
Location: In the Laundry Room
Posts: 12,332
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Mon August 20, 2012 4:42pm
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You did a great job on this page
Great kit choice, wants me to and use it as it is sitting to long on my hard drive.
Your placement of everything is excellent, so well grounded.
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panama343
Addicted to this place
Registered: December 2008
Location: Corpus Christi, Texas
Posts: 2,183
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Tue August 21, 2012 2:43am
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Very beautiful. Definitely elegant.
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Raphne
Digital Elite Alumni
Registered: April 2008
Location: USA
Posts: 12,069
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Tue August 21, 2012 2:45am
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Love the kit choice, so elegant! Great journaling-- makes me want chocolate!
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