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Sketch 1/ Revision 2-DSU 190
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hoozieg
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Registered: August 2005
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow
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Canoeing the Big MO (Missouri). With family friends, DH and DD spent 6 days in 105 degree heat, with rattlesnakes, canoeing down the Missouri River in Montana.
Used Complimentary colors and a sketch by Amberk at http://www.digitalscrapbookplace.co....544&page=2
Credit: Generic kit - Lauren Bavin (bg paper), Family Adventures kit by Angie Svoboda (buttons), focal point photo mat, grounding strip and diamond brads - Laura Pittman LP Original Kit |
· Date: Wed October 12, 2005 · Views: 358
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Keywords: dsu 190, week 2, sketch color
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arlene6
I live at this place!
Registered: June 2005
Posts: 4,174
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Wed October 12, 2005 5:45am
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I read you title as - Revulsion. LOL. Now that I see you had to kill a rattler, maybe I wasn't so far off? Your photo placement is spectacular b/c it ended up not looking crowded for as much fun as you fit in. Your family looks like they had a great time.
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Lauren
Team Digital Head Designer
Registered: March 2004
Location: Auckland New Zealand
Posts: 41,566
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Wed October 12, 2005 7:59am
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I like this - Id reduce the size of those diamond brads a bit - but all in all - a big improvement
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shazzt
Team Digital & Proud of It
Registered: June 2004
Posts: 25,042
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Wed October 12, 2005 8:39am
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Well I didn't get to comment on the last one so I will try on this one. I wonder what the title would look like moved to the left - I'm not sure I like it right in the middle like that. Definately reduce the size of the brads. Looks like a great trip - and I love the way you have put the layout together - you get a real sense of the beauty of the countryside they were exploring.
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Cheers Sharon 
 
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Judyy
DET Alumni
Registered: December 2004
Location: You mean now?
Posts: 3,173
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Wed October 12, 2005 2:14pm
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I didn't comment on the original either, but I like this revision much better. And you added more photos, too, didn't you?
One more little thing you might try: if this were paper style, I'm not sure you'd put your title right on the background photo, but you might put it on a strip of vellum. So you might try adding a strip of vellum under the title. Just a thought.
Even if you don't change a thing, I absolutely love this LO and the story it tells.
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--Judyy
Rebel without a Clue 
   
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Donut
Yay I can choose my name!
Registered: April 2005
Location: New Zealand
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Wed October 12, 2005 11:48pm
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I love the colours the photos, the layout, everything!! What a great trip,looks so much fun!
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